Captain Holeman 'Silver Eye' Godfrey: Backstory Comic (WIP)

To expand my narrative and 2D art skills, I created a short story using twine about pirates in a world where dinosaurs and mythical creatures coexist. I gave each member of the silver tears crew a backstory and a purpose, Starting with the captain his backstory will be explored by a single comic, with the goal to branch out to other areas such as 3D to explore and tell this bigger overarching story.
If people are interested in this comic and want to see more then I will continue to explore more of the crew's backstory through comics.

At the end of the comic, I will be creating a sort of hub world in 3D where you can interact and read the comics within the world, the idea is to keep adding to this Hub world until I can create an environment that is bursting with narrative, meaning and excellent world-building.

About these three pages:
The three pages available to view now set the tone and address the setting of the universe in which this story is set. The tale is told by the narrator, a hermit who collects stories and writes abstracts depicting them.

The art style I have chosen is watercolours.
All future Pages will be uploaded to this website here:https://globalcomix.com/c/captain-silver-eye-/chapters/en/1/1
Any feedback is much appreciated!